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Array ( [sid] => 159525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gift Of Love [time] => 2010-05-04 14:35:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everything around me fades, whenever you are near.
All my doubts just fade away. I’m left without a care.
I never thought I’d find the day, where I might want to live.
So much changed when you leaned in, and let me feel your kiss.
Brand new doors have opened up, I find that I can’t wait.
To walk through every single one, as long as your in wake.
I never want to leave your side, pathetic as it seems.
Only you can make me feel so whole, and so complete.
I only hope to give you halve of what you’ve given me.
With everything you’ve ever done, your way to hard to beat.
How can I compete with you? A man who saved my soul.
Nothing I can ever do, compares with your bestowal.
All that I can think to do is write you poems of love.
Even though it’s not that much, I pray that it’s enough.
I’ll always try to give you more, cause that’s what you deserve.
You say my love is all you need, the rest is just absurd.
Maybe, yes, your words are true. In fact I know for sure.
Still I find I have to give you everything and more.
Your asking me to please just stop. Enjoy the love we share.
Your telling me that loves a gift that can not be compared.
Maybe now’s the time to stop. And do just what you said.
Enjoy this love we’ll always share until my final breath.
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Gift Of Love

Contributed by Nevilleconnie on Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 02:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Everything around me fades, whenever you are near.
All my doubts just fade away. I’m left without a care.
I never thought I’d find the day, where I might want to live.
So much changed when you leaned in, and let me feel your kiss.
Brand new doors have opened up, I find that I can’t wait.
To walk through every single one, as long as your in wake.
I never want to leave your side, pathetic as it seems.
Only you can make me feel so whole, and so complete.
I only hope to give you halve of what you’ve given me.
With everything you’ve ever done, your way to hard to beat.
How can I compete with you? A man who saved my soul.
Nothing I can ever do, compares with your bestowal.
All that I can think to do is write you poems of love.
Even though it’s not that much, I pray that it’s enough.
I’ll always try to give you more, cause that’s what you deserve.
You say my love is all you need, the rest is just absurd.
Maybe, yes, your words are true. In fact I know for sure.
Still I find I have to give you everything and more.
Your asking me to please just stop. Enjoy the love we share.
Your telling me that loves a gift that can not be compared.
Maybe now’s the time to stop. And do just what you said.
Enjoy this love we’ll always share until my final breath.




Copyright © Nevilleconnie ... [ 2010-05-04 14:35:35]
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Re: Gift Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 02:54:02 PM AEST
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such a pretty flowing poem, so full of love, great write!

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Gift Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by UnknownLegend on Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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There's a lot of emotion here and it really comes thru. I really like the change in direction you taken with this poem. Write on my friend.




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