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When all there is, is hurt?
While people talk about you
And make you feel like dirt

They tell you they can't love you
Because you have nothing to give
And without their love,
There is no reason to live

You look in the eyes
That is supposed to love you
And you know deep down
You’re not good enough to make this love true

Just keep on going
And walk on by
Act like this doesn't hurt you
But we both know it’s a lie

You want so badly to be loved
That you’re willing to give in
You give up everything
Just to think you win

But the truth deep down inside
Is that he took everything for you
You have no more to give
And you have too many regrets to chew

Now you walk on by
Ask you act as if this didn't hurt you
But we both know
You just want to be through

You want to give up
Knowing you have lost
Knowing that everything you have given
Is really going to cost

So I lie down
And wonder how to get out
If there is even a such thing
But for that I highly doubt
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Can i get out?

Contributed by Jessi95 on Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 09:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

But for that I really doubt Whats the point in living
When all there is, is hurt?
While people talk about you
And make you feel like dirt

They tell you they can't love you
Because you have nothing to give
And without their love,
There is no reason to live

You look in the eyes
That is supposed to love you
And you know deep down
You’re not good enough to make this love true

Just keep on going
And walk on by
Act like this doesn't hurt you
But we both know it’s a lie

You want so badly to be loved
That you’re willing to give in
You give up everything
Just to think you win

But the truth deep down inside
Is that he took everything for you
You have no more to give
And you have too many regrets to chew

Now you walk on by
Ask you act as if this didn't hurt you
But we both know
You just want to be through

You want to give up
Knowing you have lost
Knowing that everything you have given
Is really going to cost

So I lie down
And wonder how to get out
If there is even a such thing
But for that I highly doubt

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-05-02 21:01:13]
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Re: Can i get out? (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:17:32 AM AEST
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Pleasure to read. Another good write. Good job.

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