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Let me Be
Contributed by
Jessi95
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You’re sitting there
Staring at me
Won’t you please?
Just let me be!
I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I took a reluctant part
I am over you
I keep telling me
But only if
You would let me be!
I took a chance
And it got me here
I lost my heart
So I will shed a tear
I don’t mind
If you see me cry
Because it’s all my fault
That you caught my eye
I have a weakness
For people like you
But I know that
I need someone new
Because I told you I loved you
I poured out my heart
But you didn’t care
So I put my tears in my art.
Copyright ©
Jessi95
... [
2010-05-02 20:57:12]
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Re: Let me Be
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 10:27:41 PM AEST
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Sad subject but really good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Let me Be
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:22:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem with a lot of emotions. I liked the part about you putting your tears into your art. That's exactly what you did, and you did an excellent job with it. |
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Re: Let me Be
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 03:46:12 PM AEST
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so heavily poignant. maybe your experience can teach us a lesson or two concerning relationships. i admire the way you ended this write becuz you can always let yourself be when it comes to poetry!
take care
-K.Z. |
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