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[sid] => 159431
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You Are The Rain
[time] => 2010-05-01 18:34:15
[hometext] => my 10th and possible last poem for a while, I might do a 11th in about a month... I've already started on it... But it might take a while to write...
[bodytext] => ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The rain it relaxes me Like the sound of your voice Surrenders me helpless Do I really have a choice Just like when I’m in the rain And I feel that cold chill I turn around to find you Laying down on the hill I come over to join you And you ask me to sit As I start sitting I fall Just as luck would have it But I fall into my world The same world as before But it seems somewhat different As the rain starts to pour This is not the world I knew It’s not like in my dream All the sudden in the distance I hear a fainted scream I start to run towards it With the rain hitting my face I then stop and realize What is this strange and weird place Then the screaming disappears Like whispers in the wind As you appear before me Within the light that blinds When my vision returned You are holding out your hand And you say “Come with me” And I took hold of your hand As I pass through the time From the past to the present Memories of you and me Points out what my world meant It meant that I love you With every beat of my heart You are the rain that thrills me Throughout every body part. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ For the original My World poem go to my page and look at the 1st two poems (just for information on what I meant by the lines "But I fall into my world" to "It’s not like in my dream" DoubleS, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. As of this posting you have 10 posted poems and 0 interactive comments. Do not post another poem until, you, at the very least, bring your comment count up to 11. Thank you. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DoubleS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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