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Crow on a fence post
Contributed by
Daggers
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Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 04:14:47 PM in AEST
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I'm a crow on a fence post
battered by the winds
iv got shelter indeed
but Ill brave it for my sins
I'm the sun on a snowdrop
opening from it's sleep
iv got a world to light
but on it's petals I'll beat
I'm the dogs at your door
begging to be fed
but if you feed me once
your step will make my bed
like a worm in a worm hole
thoughts tunnel my mind
I am all of these things
these exist within mankind
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Re: Crow on a fence post
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 08:35:44 PM AEST
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Good poem. I actually have seen quite a few crows around lately. Interesting transformations with each stanza.
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Re: Crow on a fence post
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 11:57:42 PM AEST
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| Great observations of nature and human nature, esp like......like a worm in a worm hole thoughts tunnel my mind, a constant unstoppable process well written |
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