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Think of a dark red rose
Inhale the very essence of it
Deep into your nose

Soft skin like a new born
Cold to touch at first
But soon fills you
With a desire of the worst

Soft pink lips,
Full and proud
A sweet soft voice
That never gets loud

Her steps are quiet
Graceful like a deer
Deliberate and careful
Movement you’ll never hear

A perfect body
A vessel of the goddess
Slender yet supple
Fitting perfect in any dress

Imagine a laugh
Soft and wise
Amused for now
By your constant tries

This is the woman
Whom I call Shirin
I wait for her patiently
For our love to begin.
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Describing Shirin

Contributed by 619Prisoner on Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 09:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Close your eyes
Think of a dark red rose
Inhale the very essence of it
Deep into your nose

Soft skin like a new born
Cold to touch at first
But soon fills you
With a desire of the worst

Soft pink lips,
Full and proud
A sweet soft voice
That never gets loud

Her steps are quiet
Graceful like a deer
Deliberate and careful
Movement you’ll never hear

A perfect body
A vessel of the goddess
Slender yet supple
Fitting perfect in any dress

Imagine a laugh
Soft and wise
Amused for now
By your constant tries

This is the woman
Whom I call Shirin
I wait for her patiently
For our love to begin.

Copyright Â© 619Prisoner ... [ 2010-04-30 09:11:20]
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Re: Describing Shirin (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkWolf on Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 09:44:22 AM AEST
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How beautiful.
Describing your loved one in a sweet poem.

Re: Describing Shirin (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyM on Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:11:26 PM AEST
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This one will always stop me in my tracks, make my heart skip a beat, my mouth open, and each sense ache to feel your words. It will be etched in my heart forever.
My all time favorite.

Re: Describing Shirin (User Rating: 1 )
by brenniewinters on Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 11:51:40 AM AEST
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You have potential and this poem was enjoyable

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