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Snow gathers on its branches
Crack! Its trunk gives in
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An ancient dead tree
Contributed by
daggers
on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 03:33:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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An ancient dead tree
Snow gathers on its branches
Crack! Its trunk gives in
Copyright ©
daggers
... [
2010-04-29 03:33:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: An ancient dead tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 06:34:47 AM AEST (User
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A very interesting traditional Haiku. This
is almost sad in it's telling. Though the vision
you've displayed is still soothing. Nicely done.
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