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Array ( [sid] => 159341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Won't you dream tonight? [time] => 2010-04-29 01:45:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Won’t you dream tonight?
Its been too long since you
have risen from your slumber
to a world of your creation.

The stars shine down
upon your peaceful face
and shine into your soul
the light for your production

If clouds do stand between
then take the clouds
and craft an aura
for your piece to hang

The moon she pushes
through the clouds
and your mind inspired
molds its prowess

The rain, it plays a beat
its rhythm flows
and in your sleep
your soul, it dances

Take this dance, this prowess,
this aura, and this light,
Create your world,
It can be anything you’d like.

The night is young
let your mind excite
Oh for me,
Won’t you dream tonight? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SeanBon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Won't you dream tonight?

Contributed by SeanBon on Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 01:45:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Won’t you dream tonight?
Its been too long since you
have risen from your slumber
to a world of your creation.

The stars shine down
upon your peaceful face
and shine into your soul
the light for your production

If clouds do stand between
then take the clouds
and craft an aura
for your piece to hang

The moon she pushes
through the clouds
and your mind inspired
molds its prowess

The rain, it plays a beat
its rhythm flows
and in your sleep
your soul, it dances

Take this dance, this prowess,
this aura, and this light,
Create your world,
It can be anything you’d like.

The night is young
let your mind excite
Oh for me,
Won’t you dream tonight?

Copyright Â© SeanBon ... [ 2010-04-29 01:45:17]
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Re: Won't you dream tonight? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirty on Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 02:05:45 AM AEST
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The meticulous nature and sense of purpose in this poem are very strong, and these qualities keep it from being cheesy.

Very nice!

Re: Won't you dream tonight? (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 06:39:32 AM AEST
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There is some very beautiful imagery in this. In fact
some of it is exquisitely breathtaking. But then, finding
the muse in nature's greatest gifts, usually is. It's
lovely how you captured that emotion and illustrated
it here for us to read. This has a shimmer to it.

Excellent post! -- Achelois

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