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[aid] => mick
[title] => when my heart breaks
[time] => 2003-04-13 23:05:00
[hometext] => what do you do when your son leaves home way before his time?when he does not see the beauty in the life you have chosen?
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mick arian miller, when he was born
almost lost him right then; was forwarned
but the doctors brought him around again
mara, mick, george, then our lives began
my world was bright
again i labored all through the night
mick, my second child, always like the sun
life brought us pain yet he'd never run
always by my side with a smile on his face
no matter what went down, a hugging embrace,
ahh but life can a wicked web weave
my time with this special son was breve
he saw a life he wanted more
packed up his things and went out the door
i followed him and to home brought him back
that's when our lives were really ransacked
when someone's not happy in the life you choose
you must let them go, or forever you will loose
at that time to me, his mom, he'd no longer cling
mick was a young man who felt destined to be king,
and now his life is lived elsewhere
we are hardly thought of with nary a care
he's raised by relatives who have money to burn
life here in the mountains mick has adjourned
i cannot compete with these gold diggers hearts
they showed him the world on a platter, so smart
when you love someone, yes, you set them free
now he attends a nine thousand dollar acadamy
ahh it doesn't matter he is a happy young man
now he lives within' an italian clan,
times missing him, that's when my heart breaks
i wonder does he sleep now, or is he awake?
what are the thoughts that run through his head
at least all unspoken words now have been said
mick has lived away from home for two years
i think now i have cried all my tears
least the boys not sappy
he seems to be quite happy
mick's new world's given him many things
except the song of our morning dove that sings.
2014 author's note: mick did return home shortly after i wrote this; he has become a scientist:)
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when my heart breaks
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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mick arian miller, when he was born
almost lost him right then; was forwarned
but the doctors brought him around again
mara, mick, george, then our lives began
my world was bright
again i labored all through the night
mick, my second child, always like the sun
life brought us pain yet he'd never run
always by my side with a smile on his face
no matter what went down, a hugging embrace,
ahh but life can a wicked web weave
my time with this special son was breve
he saw a life he wanted more
packed up his things and went out the door
i followed him and to home brought him back
that's when our lives were really ransacked
when someone's not happy in the life you choose
you must let them go, or forever you will loose
at that time to me, his mom, he'd no longer cling
mick was a young man who felt destined to be king,
and now his life is lived elsewhere
we are hardly thought of with nary a care
he's raised by relatives who have money to burn
life here in the mountains mick has adjourned
i cannot compete with these gold diggers hearts
they showed him the world on a platter, so smart
when you love someone, yes, you set them free
now he attends a nine thousand dollar acadamy
ahh it doesn't matter he is a happy young man
now he lives within' an italian clan,
times missing him, that's when my heart breaks
i wonder does he sleep now, or is he awake?
what are the thoughts that run through his head
at least all unspoken words now have been said
mick has lived away from home for two years
i think now i have cried all my tears
least the boys not sappy
he seems to be quite happy
mick's new world's given him many things
except the song of our morning dove that sings.
2014 author's note: mick did return home shortly after i wrote this; he has become a scientist:)
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by karoody on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 02:22:05 AM AEST
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hugs to you nessa...how this must of hurt you...love is not money, as you know. the unconditional love you show your kids can never be sold from a store. can never be gained from the bricks of an academy...
one day your son will wake up to this realization...hope it's sooner then later. i went through the same thing, only i was the wayward child. when i realized that i was on the wrong path, my parents supported me in my emotional thime of need....and to that i amm forever greatful but never in debt in their eyes...i am faithful that you would do the same. and i know you are quite aware of these tangled matters of the heart...and the things love can do...sometimes it just helps to hear it, hope i made you smile...
love,
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by karoody on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 02:23:34 AM AEST
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oops, emotional time is what it should have read...where is the spell checker here????
lol
:-)
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 04:03:50 AM AEST
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I cried as I read this. I feel your pain my dear friend. I have known this pain for many years. It will work out one day....believe.
If I can ever get signed in here I have 2 poems to post.
Maybe when you read them(if you read them) you will see I do know your pain and what came for me.
Miracles do happen ,my friend.......I will hope that you find that you are...undefeated after all.
Keep your faith....he will see love is not for sale....and come to his Mother.
(((hugs)))
Sharon;)
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:37:53 AM AEST
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Such a sad poem. I truly hope it works out in the end. I am sire it will. *hugs*
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Re: when my heart breaks
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Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:40:39 AM AEST
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| AAHHH So very touching to me makes me wonder about my two sons! Christina |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 08:43:41 AM AEST
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| this is so sad... i am so sorry for this pain that is upon... years nay pass, but pains such as this do seem to linger... i pray that someday he sees the errors of his ways... love transcends all, maybe when he has his own children, he will see this... blessings to you and a very good write... |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:29:43 AM AEST
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This is heart braking. Your such a dear person. Im sending you a hug.
Michelle |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:07:23 PM AEST
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| Oh, Nessa, what a tear-jerking, heartbreaking piece, but I'm sure in time he will return to you, don't let sorrow overwhelm you know that he's still around and just a phone call away, ( you should have grounded him till he was 25 yrs old, Ha, Ha) hugs to you Val |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:10:56 PM AEST
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We learn so much about each other through our poetry,and I see beauty in you!!!And oneday....your son will see that beauty...
and come to love what he has missed all along....the love only a *mom* can give...
unconditional!!!! May you find comfort from your surrounding friends....and your poetry! :-)
{{{{{{nessa}}}}}
Angel....always...Godspeed!!! joni :-)
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:44:59 AM AEST
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| Oh! what a tragic incident.. Ah! it gives me pain.. my second son..neglected studies.. left us two years ago.. I brought him back.. and asked him to continue studies.. still worrying us... he is planning to leave us. still .. problems due to him. .. its o.k. ..I understand the pain in your motherly heart.. this is one memorable poem from you dear friend. venkat |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:55:13 AM AEST
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Oh Ness.... I know how much this hurts you. I can only hope and pray that Mick finds his way back into your life and your home.. and I'm sure some day, he will.....
Love and hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST
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I can only imagine the pain you must be going through. I look at my parents and see the pain in their eyes now that my older sister has nothing to do with them....and I wonder, in the years to come, if my children will choose to maintain a relationship with me....
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:12:40 PM AEST
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money can corrupt the best of us and soil the most purest of us... it seems that your sweet son has lost view of what life is about and will soon hopefully soon become the prodigal son and come back to what is best for him... i love the style of writing it is completely new to me
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:51:03 PM AEST
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| My daughter lives far away. I miss her !it soubds like you are ok now, writing poetry helps keep it up its good, Nancy |
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Re: when my heart breaks
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:45:57 PM AEST
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Well written. Interesting perception.
Wonder what Mick would write, could
he do so, from his own point of view.
Best wishes for a positive adult relationship,
when that time comes. MB
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