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Array ( [sid] => 159283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Do you Love Me? or do you Hate Me? [time] => 2010-04-27 12:53:19 [hometext] => My second poem ive ever written. Its basically about my ex boyfriend. [bodytext] => I know were through
Now you dont want anything to do with me
But I wanted you to know
I actually loved you

You say I lied,
Right through my teeth.

What you thought
and what you said,
Just hurt me everyday
Worse and worse

I wish our love.
Could have lasted longer
But now I feel like nothing,
nothing but a failure.

I miss your hugs
I miss your smile.
Your laugh, your love.
Everything.

So take your time
I want this all in just one sentence
So I can comprehend why you left me stranded
Torn and useless

Words cant descrive the pain I feel inside.
So tell me why you left me?

To make this story easy,
Easy come easy go

How much I really loved you
Is kinda, sorta crazy

I didnt wanna let you go

Giving up for you is one of the hardest things i ever had to do
So take your time,
As you waste your time,
Thinking that I didnt love you... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 111 [topic] => 25 [informant] => xxdropdeadxrawr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Do you Love Me? or do you Hate Me?

Contributed by xxdropdeadxrawr on Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 12:53:19 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I know were through
Now you dont want anything to do with me
But I wanted you to know
I actually loved you

You say I lied,
Right through my teeth.

What you thought
and what you said,
Just hurt me everyday
Worse and worse

I wish our love.
Could have lasted longer
But now I feel like nothing,
nothing but a failure.

I miss your hugs
I miss your smile.
Your laugh, your love.
Everything.

So take your time
I want this all in just one sentence
So I can comprehend why you left me stranded
Torn and useless

Words cant descrive the pain I feel inside.
So tell me why you left me?

To make this story easy,
Easy come easy go

How much I really loved you
Is kinda, sorta crazy

I didnt wanna let you go

Giving up for you is one of the hardest things i ever had to do
So take your time,
As you waste your time,
Thinking that I didnt love you...

Copyright © xxdropdeadxrawr ... [ 2010-04-27 12:53:19]
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Re: Do you Love Me? or do you Hate Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 02:15:36 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
good writing. Keep it up.
smiles, blessings, healing,
emy

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