Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:19:06 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 159210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rage [time] => 2010-04-25 01:55:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I want to rage
Until the corners can feel me
I want to bleed
Before Noah can save the world

I want to scream
Until no one hears me
So I know it’s all true
Everything you’ve never said
In such plain words

I want to scratch
This handmade doll of me apart
Scraps to begin with
Maker’s worst edition

I want to cry
So hard I laugh
At the gushing irony

Feel this here
In my side
To know I was never real

I want to die
A loud, clean death
With an echo that never forgives
And no mess to fuss over
Can't trip on false alibis

I hope there are
Separate rings of hell for us
Because I want to live in a place
Where you’ve never breathed [comments] => 5 [counter] => 327 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Rage

Contributed by Chamaron on Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 01:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

I want to rage
Until the corners can feel me
I want to bleed
Before Noah can save the world

I want to scream
Until no one hears me
So I know it’s all true
Everything you’ve never said
In such plain words

I want to scratch
This handmade doll of me apart
Scraps to begin with
Maker’s worst edition

I want to cry
So hard I laugh
At the gushing irony

Feel this here
In my side
To know I was never real

I want to die
A loud, clean death
With an echo that never forgives
And no mess to fuss over
Can't trip on false alibis

I hope there are
Separate rings of hell for us
Because I want to live in a place
Where you’ve never breathed

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2010-04-25 01:55:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 02:28:22 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well don't know what brought this on but I sure hope you feel better.
I'd say you captured your subject well.
smiles,
emy

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by LyssaM on Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 07:39:57 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love the last 4 verses of the poem. It really brings out the need for you to want to get away from that person. Awesome read.

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 09:20:27 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh this is just fantastic!! You've a real skill for writing
emotion. Love the word choices and imagery. And
that last verse? b r i l l i a n t !! This is poetic perfection!

Excellent, excellent post! -- Achelois

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by kessembi on Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 12:44:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I want to cry
So hard I laugh
At the gushing irony

^ ^ These words sing to me. Great job!

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by dypsomaniac on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 09:16:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

very nice stuff.......it should be mandatory for everyone on this site to read that ending.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com