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[aid] => mick
[title] => Untitled
[time] => 2010-04-23 22:44:43
[hometext] => I made a huge mistake, and i now continue to regret it. This is the first draft of my poem. I still think i could revise it quite a bit, but help would be nice.
[bodytext] => Once upon a time there was a girl and a boy But this is not a fairytale, Not a happily ever after She too young and he soon to move away Yet they fell for eachother His eyes never left her And his mind was always at her side Body and soul unite Heart and heart grow beyond They were partners of the deepest kind "Soul mates," they said, "forever" Every night was a late night adventure 3am phone calls, Wanting to be by eachothers side But this is not a fairytale Not a happily ever after She too young and he soon to move away Yet they fell for eachother One too-long gaze and someone must've noticed Because the rumors began to spread. Her loved ones cast disapproving eyes And you must remember, she was young. For the seed of doubt took root "Don't you want to be special?" they asked And so the seed flourished He was leaving, she would stay And so she told him "I dont love you anymore" This is not a fairytale, Not a happily ever after She too young and he soon to move away Yet they fell for eachother For a time, I felt great The rumors faded away But with each oncoming day I hold more regret For pushing you away Because I know in my core That i still love you Everytime my phone rings , i pray its you. Everytime i turn the corner, i hope your there. I dream of you And I like to think that you dream of me too Eventhough i know you dont When i said those words to you It took me a while, But i realized somethings missing A piece of me broke off inside you As you walked away, Hiding your tears from me. "I'm sorry, i love you" my eyes plead But body and soul say differently I want you back I miss you already But im afraid its too late I hope when you return home in some years You'll realize that you miss me too Then we can finally say "I love you." [comments] => 2 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ExoM [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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