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I loved her beyond reason,
My heart stops just thinking about her.
Am I a fool, a dreamer, a madman?
To believe that we would remain together forever?
Why is it in this great world of ours
That you can find and experience true perfection,
Only to have it snatched away in the blink of an eye?
She could smile, she could cry, she could admonish,
But whatever, I just wanted to hold her, assure her,
That everything was alright and always would be.
I would protect her, defend her with my very life,
But in the end she was taken from me, destroyed me,
And it was beyond my control but in God’s hand.
I am lost, abandoned; I want to be taken to her.

Alistair Muir
21/04/2010
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Lost

Contributed by aliopterix on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 12:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Lost

I loved her beyond reason,
My heart stops just thinking about her.
Am I a fool, a dreamer, a madman?
To believe that we would remain together forever?
Why is it in this great world of ours
That you can find and experience true perfection,
Only to have it snatched away in the blink of an eye?
She could smile, she could cry, she could admonish,
But whatever, I just wanted to hold her, assure her,
That everything was alright and always would be.
I would protect her, defend her with my very life,
But in the end she was taken from me, destroyed me,
And it was beyond my control but in God’s hand.
I am lost, abandoned; I want to be taken to her.

Alistair Muir
21/04/2010

Copyright Â© aliopterix ... [ 2010-04-23 12:58:23]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 07:42:03 PM AEST
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I am touched by this piece. I am so sorry she was taken from you. I can feel your pain and your love for her here. Powerful poem.

Heidi

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 07:59:33 AM AEST
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Only to have it snatched away in the blink of an eye,, finding love is difficult but to have it snatched away when you have found it is so cruel,from the heart and full of sadness well written

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