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it breathes heavy for all

transparent fury lurking
near ready to sting the tongue

a wrinkle unfolding an iron fist
scorching gray matter

xanax calm until time
releases pressures boil

isolating love to highways
and cold, silent rooms

relentless in pursuit of madness
only tears may stagger progression

stitched lips waiting to be pulled
hate rises when hearts stumble
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Patience

Contributed by duff on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 08:03:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Descendant of coded makeup
it breathes heavy for all

transparent fury lurking
near ready to sting the tongue

a wrinkle unfolding an iron fist
scorching gray matter

xanax calm until time
releases pressures boil

isolating love to highways
and cold, silent rooms

relentless in pursuit of madness
only tears may stagger progression

stitched lips waiting to be pulled
hate rises when hearts stumble

Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-04-23 08:03:24]
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Re: Patience (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 08:27:52 PM AEST
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I love this! The images are perfectly described. Powerful writing.

Heidi

Re: Patience (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:28:07 AM AEST
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I sense an incredibly difficult struggle in this. Something
that breathes of inner torment. We can be our own worst
enemy and when life around us becomes a suffocating
vat of arrogance and narcissism, we draw further into
our own safety nets. You write with emotion that is raw
and rare, and it is quite admirable. Well done!

LOVE that last line!!

Fantastic write! -- Achelois

Re: Patience (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:28:10 PM AEST
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Another well written write keep using that gift you have from God.

Re: Patience (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:30:56 PM AEST
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nice! strong words. I loved it

-isolating love to highways
and cold, silent rooms-

deep...

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