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While I played around
I heard you speak
It was such a beautiful sound

You looked at me
And said Hello
And in your eyes
Your Beauty showed

I can’t believe
The moments gone
I can’t believe
It’s waited that long

Now it will all
Go back to the way it was.
I would ask you why
But all you’d say was cause

The way I feel
Does it shine though?
The way I feel
Can you believe it’s true?

Can you possibly
Feel the same?
Or is this all
To you just a game?

Yes you were there today
And you where playing around
Don’t you understand?
Your voice is a beautiful sound?

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Beautiful Sound

Contributed by Jessi95 on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I saw you today
While I played around
I heard you speak
It was such a beautiful sound

You looked at me
And said Hello
And in your eyes
Your Beauty showed

I can’t believe
The moments gone
I can’t believe
It’s waited that long

Now it will all
Go back to the way it was.
I would ask you why
But all you’d say was cause

The way I feel
Does it shine though?
The way I feel
Can you believe it’s true?

Can you possibly
Feel the same?
Or is this all
To you just a game?

Yes you were there today
And you where playing around
Don’t you understand?
Your voice is a beautiful sound?

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-04-22 19:23:58]
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Re: Beautiful Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 08:16:36 PM AEST
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Another great poem. I always said a poem should be created with deep emotions and not fancy words. You do this very well. As long as you feel the emotions while writing a poem, that's all that matters. poetry is a way to release emotions that you have inside, and as long as you feel a measure of joy and relieve when you've finished writing a poem, that's all that counts.

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