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Smile for the heart
Contributed by
Jessi95
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:17:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It has been a long time
Since I felt this way
the heart in my chest
wants to come above Bay
Its beating so fast
I was afraid you could hear it
but you just smile at me
and my heart begins to split
Then you told me about her
and I couldn't bear the pain
but I hold on tight
as I walk into the rain
My smile is fake
but my heart rings out true
as I look and I can't help
but to fall in love with you
you smile back
and I can see in your eyes
that you could say you love me
but you would be telling lies
So smile that goofy grin
and know that you are free
and we will always be friends
even though it hurts me
Copyright ©
Jessi95
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2010-04-22 16:17:32]
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Re: Smile for the heart
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by Anonymous5069 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:31:01 PM AEST
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Re: Smile for the heart
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by JakerBaker88 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:33:56 PM AEST
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| Very well written. You captured perfectly that feeling of unrequited love. I myself am in a similar situation and can say you wrote exactly how I feel. Good job. Keep on writing because you have got the talent for it. Take care. ;) |
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Re: Smile for the heart
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:14:57 PM AEST
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| there are many different types of love. But unrequited love has got to be my least favorite of all. I know what it feels like to love someone who only thinks of you as a friend. You did an excellent job of describing the feelings. Sad poem, but none the less a great poem. |
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