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A man with Inspiration
Contributed by
BrandonRapson
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 02:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Consumed by my own stupidity,
They say time heals all wounds,
infact it only burns a bigger whole in your heart,
you try to forget,
open your eyes to reality,
but there is only so much you can take,
look how far we have come,
but watch all of your dreams fall apart,
As time goes on,
you forget what road you should be taking,
or what path has lead you wrong,
I am a man with inspiration,
to show the world where my heart belongs,
I need to be by your side,
To hold you in my arms.
(Brandon Rapson)
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BrandonRapson
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2010-04-22 14:27:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A man with Inspiration
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 05:26:55 PM AEST (User
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For a first attempt at poetry, you did well expressing yourself. The anger, confusion, anguish, and longing were all perceptible to the reader. Good job. |
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Re: A man with Inspiration
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandonRapson on
Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 03:50:42 AM AEST (User
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Thanks buddy, I really appreciate the comment. This poem means a lot to me right now :) |
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