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Array ( [sid] => 159112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A SOLUTION [time] => 2010-04-22 04:36:50 [hometext] => this poem is about the current state of chaos ruling in the world as seen on a daily basis-somewhere or the other in the world-at some corner we can hear the sad stories of war,calamity,distress. [bodytext] => A simple solution is needed-
To the perplexities of the mind,
To the fears of the mortal body,
To the vague ideas of the brain.
A more encouraging attitude is needed,
To the dwindling spirit,
To the restless soul,
To the lack of courage.
A more feasible atmosphere is needed,
To the diseases prevalent,
To the agonies,
Of the war stricken people.
A new hope is needed,
To the uncertainties,
To the confusion and strife,
To want, despair and struggles.
A helping hand is needed,
To the global and domestic problems,
To the long standing disputes,
To solve the intricate puzzle of humanity.
A sense of understanding is needed,
To the ills of the society and human race,
To the afflictions of the mankind,
To war and conflicts of terrorism.
A hopeful attitude is needed,
To the disputes and conflicts,
To the warring factions,
To the opposition in the world.
Gateways are always open,
To the prevalent conflicts,
To wars and tensions,
But to receive its faculties-
One must be open-minded;
And analyze benevolently,
Stop we must the terror,
End the hostilities,
End the ugly horrors,
End the resorting to weapons,
Must we be fault finders,
Must we take extreme pleasure-
In religious fanaticism.
Must we slaughter our brethren,
Must we degrade our neighbors.
The solution to our complexities-
Lie open in front of us,
Only a supporting attitude is needed,
Only a ready mind is needed,
Only a daring willingness is required.
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A SOLUTION

Contributed by jyotika on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:36:50 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

A simple solution is needed-
To the perplexities of the mind,
To the fears of the mortal body,
To the vague ideas of the brain.
A more encouraging attitude is needed,
To the dwindling spirit,
To the restless soul,
To the lack of courage.
A more feasible atmosphere is needed,
To the diseases prevalent,
To the agonies,
Of the war stricken people.
A new hope is needed,
To the uncertainties,
To the confusion and strife,
To want, despair and struggles.
A helping hand is needed,
To the global and domestic problems,
To the long standing disputes,
To solve the intricate puzzle of humanity.
A sense of understanding is needed,
To the ills of the society and human race,
To the afflictions of the mankind,
To war and conflicts of terrorism.
A hopeful attitude is needed,
To the disputes and conflicts,
To the warring factions,
To the opposition in the world.
Gateways are always open,
To the prevalent conflicts,
To wars and tensions,
But to receive its faculties-
One must be open-minded;
And analyze benevolently,
Stop we must the terror,
End the hostilities,
End the ugly horrors,
End the resorting to weapons,
Must we be fault finders,
Must we take extreme pleasure-
In religious fanaticism.
Must we slaughter our brethren,
Must we degrade our neighbors.
The solution to our complexities-
Lie open in front of us,
Only a supporting attitude is needed,
Only a ready mind is needed,
Only a daring willingness is required.

Copyright © jyotika ... [ 2010-04-22 04:36:50]
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Re: A SOLUTION (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkWolf on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 05:29:41 AM AEST
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I like this poem it is a little leangthly but its a nice write.

Re: A SOLUTION (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 05:35:44 AM AEST
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You are right in what you say, yet there is too much mistrust in the world, too many long standing prejudices handed down the generations.
Change can happen, but often it takes time.Hopefully that is one thing we do have.

Steve

Re: A SOLUTION (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:18:58 AM AEST
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Hi,

Well said and well crafted.

Greed and the desire for power are behind many
of our woes. Harness them, and we might have
a chance.

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