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Fractured
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 08:14:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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So steady, so fragile. A little of both
She breaths while you watch. Turns her head, than she chokes.
So happy, so merry. So lost in her fights.
She laughs while you watch. Turns her head, than she cries.
So peaceful, so sated. So torn and confused.
At ease while you watch. Turns her head, sinks in doom.
Two different sides to a girl once so whole.
Let go of her dreams, than gave up on her hopes.
Lost in the world, and so lost in herself.
To scared to ask for a hand or some help.
Voices now whisper of deaths peaceful bliss.
She picks up the knife and looks down at her wrists.
One little slice and the pain would be gone.
Set free from heartache she's held for to long.
So lifeless, so pale faced. She's found her escape.
No more pretending, cause death can't be faked.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
... [
2010-04-21 20:14:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fractured
(User Rating: 1 ) by DarkWolf on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 05:55:43 AM AEST (User
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Wow, so sad |
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Re: Fractured
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:26:24 AM AEST (User
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Incredibly emotional, this. That last line is perfection.
You truly snared the feelings of hopelessness in this,
and the finality of decision to end the pain. Good job.
Wonderfully written. -- Achelois |
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