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Array ( [sid] => 15906 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Friend is Dead [time] => 2003-04-13 14:05:00 [hometext] => I have social problems. Well, one large problem that is socially related. It hurts to lose a best-friend of 4 years. Can anyone relate? [bodytext] => My friend is dead
She's far away
She took on a lover
And he killed her that day

He murdered her reputation
He murdered the truth
Me murdered the good times
And he murdered me too

He slaughtered her spirit
He destroyed her beauty
He manipulated her kindness
He bettered her good reason

She no longer laughs
She no longer cries
She no longer remembers
My teary good byes

So she's cold in her grave
I don't visit her anymore
Cause her lover haunts the graveyard
He has victems gallore [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Uncooked [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Friend is Dead

Contributed by Uncooked on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My friend is dead
She's far away
She took on a lover
And he killed her that day

He murdered her reputation
He murdered the truth
Me murdered the good times
And he murdered me too

He slaughtered her spirit
He destroyed her beauty
He manipulated her kindness
He bettered her good reason

She no longer laughs
She no longer cries
She no longer remembers
My teary good byes

So she's cold in her grave
I don't visit her anymore
Cause her lover haunts the graveyard
He has victems gallore

Copyright © Uncooked ... [ 2003-04-13 14:05:00]
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Re: My Friend is Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:31:27 PM AEST
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yes i can relate, my best friends hubby is dying now, and ive lost many myself..
this poem is very sad, im so sorry for your loss, it is a beautiful poem though:)
hugs nessa

Re: My Friend is Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 04:57:27 PM AEST
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very sad indeed
Sharon

Re: My Friend is Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:54:48 PM AEST
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Im so sorry. This is so very sad. I can relate to this.
Michelle

Re: My Friend is Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:36:07 PM AEST
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My dear heart.
Yes, I can relate to this one in word and deed! I was married to a man that tried to kill me everyway but physically, and after I divorced him, he tried that too! He wanted to take away my smile, and laughter,
And then if that wasn't enough...he didn't want me to have any friends. After that the complete obsession took over, he didn't even want me to "feel" anymore. If I hadn't have found how to get away from him, I'd have been better off dead. They do that you, these "demons camoflaughed in man's form!" They are self-destructing and they want to take everyone with them!
Beautiful poem written through tears......I'm so sorry,
It was too late to save her!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue

Re: My Friend is Dead (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 07:28:16 PM AEST
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i know who this is about, and its a great poem.

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