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summer’s night dressed in rain
their smiles spin ecstasy wild

gazing into mirrored green
these eyes forget public's care

laughter loud bursts open
blanketing life’s quiet cool

love soaring into the streets
crashing puddles with hearts lead

pure emotion sidestepping strange minds
this moment captures life in bloom

live to love or hide to hate
this love shatters shields exposing the inside

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Pure Love

Contributed by duff on Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 08:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Under the moonlight they dance

summer’s night dressed in rain
their smiles spin ecstasy wild

gazing into mirrored green
these eyes forget public's care

laughter loud bursts open
blanketing life’s quiet cool

love soaring into the streets
crashing puddles with hearts lead

pure emotion sidestepping strange minds
this moment captures life in bloom

live to love or hide to hate
this love shatters shields exposing the inside

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2010-04-19 20:21:12]
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Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 08:34:24 PM AEST
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This is stunning. Absolutely stunning. There is a
playfulness in this, but it also possesses a delicate
affinity that is so damn gorgeous. I adore the last
line, but this is all just wonderfully written. Beauty
wrapped in poetry.

A delightful piece. -- Achelois

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by daggers on Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 02:12:02 PM AEST
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beautiful! it conjure's visual like a motion picture

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:11:28 PM AEST
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beautiful..

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:19:35 AM AEST
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i'm speechless i just wish i had an ounce of your ability keep up the excellent work

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 06:17:54 AM AEST
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beautiful imagery

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 09:59:36 PM AEST
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another great piece by a gifted poet
one does find

creating the imagery for
one's mind

you wrote,
"gazing into mirrored green
these eyes forget public's care"

with these lines have you foretold
the reality of love, how it is so bold
when "pure emotion" enraptures those truely in love
nothing in this world will ever rise above.

Keeping writing duff, because we really love your stuff!

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:21:04 AM AEST
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pure as the love you expressed!!..nice rthym as well!!

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 06:28:39 AM AEST
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"live to love or hide to hate" - love this line because so many people really do hide instead of loving.

"this love shatters shields exposing the inside" - something that real love should always do.

Re: Pure Love (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:23:38 PM AEST
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Wow really liked this write always use that gift you have from God just keep writing.

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