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Array ( [sid] => 159014 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Aren't you out of blood yet? [time] => 2010-04-18 18:40:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A thousand shall fall at your right
and on your left the cowards die
How can you count coins in a wishing well
when you look towards the sky

and add the raindrops that fall
to wash the blood you spilled
the cells you thrilled to burst
your inaction gives no satisfaction

So why dont you sharped your razor blades
and fill a bathtub with your life
Warm water to ease the slaughter
but you already read that on a forum
didnt you

Make sure you close the garage
before you turn on the car to suffocate
suffocate the lies you tell
to gain support on sites you dwell

How does grey feel
can you feel it pulse in your veins
or are they gone now, no chance for an encore
are you even human anymore? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 73 [informant] => regent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Aren't you out of blood yet?

Contributed by regent on Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 06:40:11 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

A thousand shall fall at your right
and on your left the cowards die
How can you count coins in a wishing well
when you look towards the sky

and add the raindrops that fall
to wash the blood you spilled
the cells you thrilled to burst
your inaction gives no satisfaction

So why dont you sharped your razor blades
and fill a bathtub with your life
Warm water to ease the slaughter
but you already read that on a forum
didnt you

Make sure you close the garage
before you turn on the car to suffocate
suffocate the lies you tell
to gain support on sites you dwell

How does grey feel
can you feel it pulse in your veins
or are they gone now, no chance for an encore
are you even human anymore?

Copyright © regent ... [ 2010-04-18 18:40:11]
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Re: Aren't you out of blood yet? (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 06:04:51 PM AEST
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This is chilling. I literally felt my stomach turn. What brutal honesty. My favorite line has to be "How does grey feel". A close approach to something many steer clear of. Well done.

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