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A Poem I Wrote For You <3
Contributed by
SammyJo
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 06:43:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You came into my life unexpectedly and simply.
The first time you looked at me, you took my breathe away,
The first time we talked, you took my heart with you,
The first time we touched, you made my dream come true.
I took a risk, and you accepted,
I messed up, and now I feel rejected.
I gave you a message,
That I still care for you.
Now I'm waiting,
In the shadows.
Tear-filled sorrows,
And unfinished Battles.
Please accept this,
Because I just want you to know,
That I still care about you,
And I hope you care about me too.
So what will it be?
Say yes or say no,
Just end this silly game.
No more suspense and waiting,
No more pain and hating.
Just a little message to say,
That I miss you today.
Copyright ©
SammyJo
... [
2010-04-14 18:43:33]
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Re: A Poem I Wrote For You <3
(User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 07:11:57 PM AEST
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Lost love and the games that can be
played by both parties...never a good
thing. Still, a touching write none the
less. You've stated your intentions
quite clearly here, so I hope they do
you the courtesy of listening and giving
you an answer.
Well, done. Thank you for sharing it.
Be well,
~Loende |
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Re: A Poem I Wrote For You <3
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by NewAtThis on
Thursday, 15th April 2010 @ 04:55:55 PM AEST
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| Written fantastically very interesting to read! and very sorry about the loss hope it works out for the best! |
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