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Nothing
Contributed by
NewAtThis
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 01:45:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sad sad song
once again gone.
My heart lost in the wind,
still i know I've sinned
where shall i begin
as the world keeps its spin
my stomach still seems uneasy
my life still makes me oh so queasy.
A twist, a turn,
a flower a thorn,
once it was found,
but now 'tis lost
my mind seems,
to be the only cost.
Some magic no trick
kinda harsh, very strict,
a loss, a death
a sorrow, till a street
a place where we will surely meet
a smile, a face, that knocks me out
a swoon, a sleep, this dream i want
a time, a place, again this dream haunts.
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NewAtThis
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2010-04-14 13:45:16]
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 05:24:42 AM AEST
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It's very good for a "random poem" that didn't take much effort. I am glad it means something to you despite it's randomness,
all poetry should mean something, and you've definately conveyed a special meaning to me.
Thankyou,
Mickey. |
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