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Array ( [sid] => 158813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories [time] => 2010-04-10 16:40:03 [hometext] => I found this poem in one of my old journals, it's about my first love. Note that I wrote this when I was in 7th grade so it's amateur, but bare with me. [bodytext] => It’s hard to think back to the times I spent with you
It’s hard to believe the things you said were true
It’s different, now I wake, without the twinkle in my eye
It’s different, because I know you weren’t just some guy
It hurts to live on every moment in despair
It hurts to face the fact that you’re no longer there
It’s better for me to pretend that I’m okay
It’s better for me to lie, the love slowly fades away
I hate it how I wonder, did it have to be this way
I hate it how I feel like I’m caught, what a cliché
Each night I lay awake, thinking of your voice
The darkness in my heart leaves me with no other choice
I don’t know what to do to stop these feelings, you don’t care
I don’t know how much longer this emptiness I can bare
What do I do now as you throw me to the side
What do I do now just a ripple in the tide
How much longer will it take for my aching heart to mend
How much longer will I feel like I just lost my only friend
I try not to think of all the times you made me laugh
I try not to think that you held my other half
I can honestly say, all we had I can’t regret
I can honestly say you, I will never ever forget
I hate to say it’s true
I hate to say I’m blue
I’ll never come to tell you
That, Chad I truly miss you
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Memories

Contributed by steffygoesrawr13 on Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 04:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It’s hard to think back to the times I spent with you
It’s hard to believe the things you said were true
It’s different, now I wake, without the twinkle in my eye
It’s different, because I know you weren’t just some guy
It hurts to live on every moment in despair
It hurts to face the fact that you’re no longer there
It’s better for me to pretend that I’m okay
It’s better for me to lie, the love slowly fades away
I hate it how I wonder, did it have to be this way
I hate it how I feel like I’m caught, what a cliché
Each night I lay awake, thinking of your voice
The darkness in my heart leaves me with no other choice
I don’t know what to do to stop these feelings, you don’t care
I don’t know how much longer this emptiness I can bare
What do I do now as you throw me to the side
What do I do now just a ripple in the tide
How much longer will it take for my aching heart to mend
How much longer will I feel like I just lost my only friend
I try not to think of all the times you made me laugh
I try not to think that you held my other half
I can honestly say, all we had I can’t regret
I can honestly say you, I will never ever forget
I hate to say it’s true
I hate to say I’m blue
I’ll never come to tell you
That, Chad I truly miss you




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Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 01:06:38 AM AEST
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Deep expression from someone at a young age. You denonstrate all your emotions and it flows nicely. Well done,


Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 06:25:36 AM AEST
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A tender outpouring from a girl growing up, into a world where affairs of the heart begin to develop,
thus thrusting upon her the journey of life, love and the loss it can inevitably bring.....
A very personal and pivotal piece from your jigsaw of life''s love experience x
Star x x x


Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 07:01:50 AM AEST
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I checked out your three poems.
Tender emotions, harsh realities and thoughtful words flowing in your poetry.
May you shine more and more like the waxing moon:-) venkat


Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Keykey on Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 09:11:41 PM AEST
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I don't find this poem amateur at all. In a matter of fact, I felt the same way with my first love. You're a very good poet and I hope you continue.




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