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Today I have visited a place I have been before
There is not a normal entrance or exit by the means of a door
It is a place that we will all see one day
But each in our own way

Today is the day I decided to make a change and take a stand
Today I vowed it would be the last time I gave myself to Death’s hand
Tempting fate and walking away, to this point I have done several times
New life has been breathed into me as of late and I have a bright future on my mind

Today as I stared down what was to be the avenue of my demise
I held to the knowledge that “You can not kill me”, which to most is a surprise
I have already been killed, years ago. I gave my heart and they devoured my soul
To walk through Hell on Earth is no way to live, but to trick death one must be a fool

With the understanding of love and happiness in the future to arrive
There rings throughout new desires and the will to stay alive
So you see, I am right; You can not kill me
I have a bright future with much more to see


Deadwriter
04/02/2010

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You Can Not Kill Me

Contributed by deadwriter on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 06:11:18 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You Can Not Kill Me

Today I have visited a place I have been before
There is not a normal entrance or exit by the means of a door
It is a place that we will all see one day
But each in our own way

Today is the day I decided to make a change and take a stand
Today I vowed it would be the last time I gave myself to Death’s hand
Tempting fate and walking away, to this point I have done several times
New life has been breathed into me as of late and I have a bright future on my mind

Today as I stared down what was to be the avenue of my demise
I held to the knowledge that “You can not kill me”, which to most is a surprise
I have already been killed, years ago. I gave my heart and they devoured my soul
To walk through Hell on Earth is no way to live, but to trick death one must be a fool

With the understanding of love and happiness in the future to arrive
There rings throughout new desires and the will to stay alive
So you see, I am right; You can not kill me
I have a bright future with much more to see


Deadwriter
04/02/2010





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Re: You Can Not Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 07:01:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful write and good for you my friend.
Happy Easter

Michelle


Re: You Can Not Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 09:12:13 PM AEST
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I gave my heart and they devoured my soul,to come back from this to a place where you declare you have a bright future with much more to see takes alot of strength and guts, great inspirational write


Re: You Can Not Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 10:32:41 PM AEST
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I really liked this..
A future...
nice

~Bin~


Re: You Can Not Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 10:49:42 PM AEST
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Another terrific write my friend and and refreshing as always.

take care
duff




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