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Mistaken
Contributed by
BrandenW13
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Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 04:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I must have thought,
foolishly,
as I normally do.
Because I thought,
there was,
a chance for us.
I was mistaken.
How could I believe,
that I could,
be happily in love.
I should have known,
like always,
that I mean nothing.
Because I was mistaken.
So I live on,
for another,
lonesome, depressed, miserable day.
Things would be,
different if,
I would have never fooled myself.
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Re: Mistaken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 01:14:51 PM AEST
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i can relate to this...you're not alone in this one
it happens to all of us, we hate rejection,
but it's better to hav taken
a good chance than none at all.
just keep trying, you'll be surprised by your own potential
hope to read more of your poems...
take care
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Re: Mistaken
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 12:10:45 PM AEST
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A realization that we are not sought by the one we seek. It takes bravery to admit what we already know but it is a step to future. Difficult to accept it may be but strength develops in time. Heartfelt and very touching.
take care
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