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Array ( [sid] => 158559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Done With Love [time] => 2010-03-31 08:33:04 [hometext] => By Andrew Hewes (me) [bodytext] => Well, I guess you done it,
You bet I felt it,
I tried to play it cool but I just melted,
Fell for your game, now I can’t get it back.

Before your love does run out, I’ll try my best,
And nothing can stop me but God-like prevention,
I guess I got to win or lose, either way I will learn from.

But no, I won’t wait not more,
You lost my love,
I’m no longer your own.

You opened up my doors,
You seen through my eyes,
I’m free,
Look in your heart and find the love for me.

Listen to my voice, as my moment passes,
We’re not on level terms; our fire just ashes,
God forsaken us, took away our right to be loved.

No, I’m not gonna wait for love,
There’s no need to complicate, control comes from above,
Put my plans into action,
Observe them through the reflection,
And look at you, as you misinterpret me and walk in the wrong direction.
Just the other day, I realised I spend too long checking my image in my mirror,
Breaking my back just to make it better,
Stood so long, my features outlined so much clearer.

There was no other reasons,
But I ***** with you, through two whole seasons,
Winter and spring, and you thought I was decent?
Waiting around isn’t my virtue,
I lost the love for you.

I won’t hesitate,
Or precipitate,
You blew my mind,
You were that kind.

Do you hear me?
As I whisper to you,
In the dark eyes of yours, oceanic blue,
I’m trying, not to fall in love again with you,
I think this is my cue,
I must leave, my time is due.

You creep in my dreams,
You push everything from my head,
You’re softer than melted butter on bread,
But you make me wish to be dead.

I’m unfortunate,
You’re just a harlot,
This is my limit,
I’m breaking free from our opposite magnets,
Forgive the attraction,
I need a distraction.

I don’t care,
You found out I cheated,
Welcome to the Dragon’s Lair,
With the fires blazing, it’s horrible, how you will be treated.

Destined to be alone,
Texting away on the telephone,
I don’t need a girl to keep at me and moan,
Because all I hear you do lately is groan.

I put up my middle finger, and in my head I scream,
‘FORGET YOU, this is my DREAM’
This is my requiem, and I look upon the scene,
I realise you’re a *****, I hate what I seen.
I thought you was my queen.

Now I know this was long,
But through all this, I realise I was wrong,
Deep down I love you, I’m done,
Leave me be, you used to be fun.




andii1993, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 22 [informant] => andii1993 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Done With Love

Contributed by andii1993 on Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 08:33:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Well, I guess you done it,
You bet I felt it,
I tried to play it cool but I just melted,
Fell for your game, now I can’t get it back.

Before your love does run out, I’ll try my best,
And nothing can stop me but God-like prevention,
I guess I got to win or lose, either way I will learn from.

But no, I won’t wait not more,
You lost my love,
I’m no longer your own.

You opened up my doors,
You seen through my eyes,
I’m free,
Look in your heart and find the love for me.

Listen to my voice, as my moment passes,
We’re not on level terms; our fire just ashes,
God forsaken us, took away our right to be loved.

No, I’m not gonna wait for love,
There’s no need to complicate, control comes from above,
Put my plans into action,
Observe them through the reflection,
And look at you, as you misinterpret me and walk in the wrong direction.
Just the other day, I realised I spend too long checking my image in my mirror,
Breaking my back just to make it better,
Stood so long, my features outlined so much clearer.

There was no other reasons,
But I ***** with you, through two whole seasons,
Winter and spring, and you thought I was decent?
Waiting around isn’t my virtue,
I lost the love for you.

I won’t hesitate,
Or precipitate,
You blew my mind,
You were that kind.

Do you hear me?
As I whisper to you,
In the dark eyes of yours, oceanic blue,
I’m trying, not to fall in love again with you,
I think this is my cue,
I must leave, my time is due.

You creep in my dreams,
You push everything from my head,
You’re softer than melted butter on bread,
But you make me wish to be dead.

I’m unfortunate,
You’re just a harlot,
This is my limit,
I’m breaking free from our opposite magnets,
Forgive the attraction,
I need a distraction.

I don’t care,
You found out I cheated,
Welcome to the Dragon’s Lair,
With the fires blazing, it’s horrible, how you will be treated.

Destined to be alone,
Texting away on the telephone,
I don’t need a girl to keep at me and moan,
Because all I hear you do lately is groan.

I put up my middle finger, and in my head I scream,
‘FORGET YOU, this is my DREAM’
This is my requiem, and I look upon the scene,
I realise you’re a *****, I hate what I seen.
I thought you was my queen.

Now I know this was long,
But through all this, I realise I was wrong,
Deep down I love you, I’m done,
Leave me be, you used to be fun.




andii1993, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.





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