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Array ( [sid] => 158460 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => take me [time] => 2010-03-27 12:57:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => slit your wist
so deep into the skin
the blood is misting
there is a pool of blood
i feel like ****
so many people try to help me
why am i still alive
god please take me
devil please take me
i try so hard at things here
this place will never be a home
i want to run really far
there is a big whole inside me
mom please take me home
dad please take me home
it hurts so much being here
i try so hard every were
dad please do not hit me any more
stop drinking it hurts us all
i cry every night waighting for you to come
ten years went by and i am still in foster care
i am such a big mistake child
i slit my wrist
what is next my throat
then i will be bead [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 72 [informant] => boo-boo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

take me

Contributed by boo-boo on Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 12:57:37 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

slit your wist
so deep into the skin
the blood is misting
there is a pool of blood
i feel like ****
so many people try to help me
why am i still alive
god please take me
devil please take me
i try so hard at things here
this place will never be a home
i want to run really far
there is a big whole inside me
mom please take me home
dad please take me home
it hurts so much being here
i try so hard every were
dad please do not hit me any more
stop drinking it hurts us all
i cry every night waighting for you to come
ten years went by and i am still in foster care
i am such a big mistake child
i slit my wrist
what is next my throat
then i will be bead

Copyright © boo-boo ... [ 2010-03-27 12:57:37]
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Re: take me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 04:44:11 PM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
Hope this is just good writing but if it's true I'd say you need a friend. If you need someone to listen you can pm me any time. I'm usually here.
huggs, prayer, blessings,
emy

Re: take me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 03:04:33 AM AEST
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So sad,and so full of pain, i do hope
this is only in the write, if True then
i hope you find strength.

well written.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: take me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 11:08:05 AM AEST
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this is so upsetting,
no child esp. at a very young age
should ever feel this way
just hang in there...
reach out to those who can help

take care

-K.Z.

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