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Array ( [sid] => 158459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => drinking [time] => 2010-03-27 12:55:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => dad stop drinking
i am hurting so much
why would you try to take her life
i cry myself to sleep
dad stop mom is hurting
you are scaring me
stop fighting with your brother
mom stop crying
grandma is really scared
the cops are on there way
they handcuffed him
took us to the cop shop
angela please stop crying
we are going home soon
mom told me she loves us
ten years went by
guess what you are at home and i am stuck here
grandma is looking down on us
dad told me he loves me and wants me home
i try so hard not to cry
a lot of the time i feel like the ugly duckling
i miss my family so much
dad please stop crying
we will be happy when i am home
they treat us like **** here
we are so far apart i wish we could be closer
god please answer our prayers [comments] => 1 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 32 [informant] => boo-boo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

drinking

Contributed by boo-boo on Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 12:55:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

dad stop drinking
i am hurting so much
why would you try to take her life
i cry myself to sleep
dad stop mom is hurting
you are scaring me
stop fighting with your brother
mom stop crying
grandma is really scared
the cops are on there way
they handcuffed him
took us to the cop shop
angela please stop crying
we are going home soon
mom told me she loves us
ten years went by
guess what you are at home and i am stuck here
grandma is looking down on us
dad told me he loves me and wants me home
i try so hard not to cry
a lot of the time i feel like the ugly duckling
i miss my family so much
dad please stop crying
we will be happy when i am home
they treat us like **** here
we are so far apart i wish we could be closer
god please answer our prayers

Copyright © boo-boo ... [ 2010-03-27 12:55:50]
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Re: drinking (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 06:41:38 PM AEST
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This is so sad.
I can relate to this causee my kids father is a recovering alcoholic. Course that came too late. We've been divorced for years. I raised my children alone but wouldn't have had it any other way.
Take care and hang tuff.
Welcome to YPDC,
huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy

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