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Array ( [sid] => 158376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Gone Black [time] => 2010-03-23 18:10:54 [hometext] => This poem is about a recent breakup I had [bodytext] => I'll make all of your love worthless
Its just something grown from lying
And I'll make my journey worth it
For you will never save the dying

Now she's shattered, but she swore
That there will be no more love
And there will also no more whore
She's shattered, but she swore
To make up for all the battles lost
She'll eventually win the war

This time you couldn't hold back
Too many emotions and too much pain
Well, from me you'll receive no gain
Just a bucket of tears and so much shame
And you'll never try again to win me back
For I'll make you realize
That all the love has gone black

Now she's shattered but she swore
She'll arise from the drowning shore
And she won't cry out anymore
She's shattered, but she swore
She's got to close the door
And stop letting in the poor [comments] => 0 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => cherrydocs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Love Gone Black

Contributed by cherrydocs on Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 06:10:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'll make all of your love worthless
Its just something grown from lying
And I'll make my journey worth it
For you will never save the dying

Now she's shattered, but she swore
That there will be no more love
And there will also no more whore
She's shattered, but she swore
To make up for all the battles lost
She'll eventually win the war

This time you couldn't hold back
Too many emotions and too much pain
Well, from me you'll receive no gain
Just a bucket of tears and so much shame
And you'll never try again to win me back
For I'll make you realize
That all the love has gone black

Now she's shattered but she swore
She'll arise from the drowning shore
And she won't cry out anymore
She's shattered, but she swore
She's got to close the door
And stop letting in the poor

Copyright © cherrydocs ... [ 2010-03-23 18:10:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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