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Array ( [sid] => 158345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paralysed [time] => 2010-03-22 11:15:20 [hometext] => I got this idea from the film ‘The Diving Bell and the Butterfly. The voice is supposed to be of Jean Bauby who suffered a stroke and blinked out his memoirs with his left eyelid, as it was the only body part he could move. [bodytext] => Trapped in a life of sorrow
Bound by the ropes of tears
Muscles dull from stillness
Paralytic and helpless here

My left eye slowly flickers
To blink out these darn words
Overly pensive mind
A sound won’t leave my mouth

A life of love and laughter
Now left behind in a stroke
Compassion has decayed,
Apart from that of myself

Tomorrow, the same drag
Open my eye to the hell
Powerless and impotent
Let me go from this world, to me a long black hole.
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Paralysed

Contributed by Amelia on Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 11:15:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Trapped in a life of sorrow
Bound by the ropes of tears
Muscles dull from stillness
Paralytic and helpless here

My left eye slowly flickers
To blink out these darn words
Overly pensive mind
A sound won’t leave my mouth

A life of love and laughter
Now left behind in a stroke
Compassion has decayed,
Apart from that of myself

Tomorrow, the same drag
Open my eye to the hell
Powerless and impotent
Let me go from this world, to me a long black hole.




Copyright © Amelia ... [ 2010-03-22 11:15:20]
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Re: Paralysed (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 24th March 2010 @ 02:35:17 PM AEST
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Well written.
Take care
Fuzzy




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