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Array ( [sid] => 158320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friends [time] => 2010-03-21 05:38:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => ‘Elise, Elise!’
They scream quietly.
You won’t get out!
They taunt me and point

With their blades for fingers,
And poison for words.
What they see through cameras,
Is a girl in a home

That is made out of straw,
It must be bricks!
As I can’t break down this door,
They’ve locked me in

And placed in cameras and mikes,
Monitoring my despair.
My second night here,
In a room that is bare.

Without a breath of fresh air
Or a drink to swallow
‘She’s doing a dance!’ they cackle
As side-to-side I stumble.

Around the room I do this,
Then finally fall to my knees.
She’s dropping! They say.
Drop dead. What great friends, they seemed.

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Friends

Contributed by Amelia on Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 05:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

‘Elise, Elise!’
They scream quietly.
You won’t get out!
They taunt me and point

With their blades for fingers,
And poison for words.
What they see through cameras,
Is a girl in a home

That is made out of straw,
It must be bricks!
As I can’t break down this door,
They’ve locked me in

And placed in cameras and mikes,
Monitoring my despair.
My second night here,
In a room that is bare.

Without a breath of fresh air
Or a drink to swallow
‘She’s doing a dance!’ they cackle
As side-to-side I stumble.

Around the room I do this,
Then finally fall to my knees.
She’s dropping! They say.
Drop dead. What great friends, they seemed.

Copyright Â© Amelia ... [ 2010-03-21 05:38:27]
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Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 09:13:54 AM AEST
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This gave me a chilling feeling of being locked away in a mental ward in padded rooms with people staring and laughing at your expense. I might be way off base here but there is a madness in this write that grabbed me. I enjoy a write that can make the reader feel off balance and this certainly did that . Well written.

take care
duff

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