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Array ( [sid] => 158316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let all my creation perish [time] => 2010-03-21 03:25:55 [hometext] => its a silent protest or a emmotional reaction of a poet keeping in mind the present value system/ value judgement of our life [bodytext] => If I don't get hurt in your sufferings
If in human atrocities
And genocide I don't get stirred up
Then let all my creation perish here.
If through the touch of your heart's fire
And creation
Rain does not fall
From my poetry
Then let all my creation perish here.
lf I fail to laugh
If the light of the night
Doesn't wake up from me within
And I fail to draw pictures
Mixing with serenity of dawn
Then let all my creation perish here
If I fail t0 bow down before the feet of the green
if my lips do not tremble seeing the smiles of a naive
if while breaking myself
Words stay suppressed in incensement
Then let all my creation perish here. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 21 [informant] => tmusehere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

let all my creation perish

Contributed by tmusehere on Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 03:25:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I don't get hurt in your sufferings
If in human atrocities
And genocide I don't get stirred up
Then let all my creation perish here.
If through the touch of your heart's fire
And creation
Rain does not fall
From my poetry
Then let all my creation perish here.
lf I fail to laugh
If the light of the night
Doesn't wake up from me within
And I fail to draw pictures
Mixing with serenity of dawn
Then let all my creation perish here
If I fail t0 bow down before the feet of the green
if my lips do not tremble seeing the smiles of a naive
if while breaking myself
Words stay suppressed in incensement
Then let all my creation perish here.

Copyright © tmusehere ... [ 2010-03-21 03:25:55]
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Re: let all my creation perish (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 03:49:17 PM AEST
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Hi,

If we remain quiet, unmoved, unhelpful, and deaf
to the plight of others, then, we're no better than
hyenas!

Thought provoking and well written.

Tommy

Re: let all my creation perish (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 11:41:43 PM AEST
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I love this poem. it's awsome. I am a big fan of these kinds of poems. I have written a few myself..I have always felt a struggle to be heard, be saw, and be noticed...and to notice, see, and hear others...this poem really hits home for me. nicely written.

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