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Array ( [sid] => 15826 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => DESPAIR*BETRAYAL [time] => 2003-04-12 11:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m calling
Help, help, can’t anyone help
I am crying out here
But no one can hear my yelp

The pain is taking over
No one cares anymore
Betrayed by my own brother
That stupid whore

Am I doomed to living
In this Hell-on-Earth
Is this pre-decided
Was I destined at birth

I hate my life
I am miserable
Bubba says he’ll always be there
Is he hiding under the table

There is no relief for my pain
The suffering never ends
My mother pulls my hair
And tries to figure out how far back my wrist bends

The pain isn’t physical though
It is locked deep inside me
I can’t let it out
I forbid anyone to see

What is the point
No one would care
No one would notice
That the difference was there

I must leave
Get away like the breeze
To get away
I would swim seven seas

But where would I go
The person I trusted
My very loved brother
He let the bond go rusted

So where do I turn next
I don’t know either
I need space
I need a breather

There aren’t any choices
Death is my only escape
Sleep is my only option
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Brit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
DESPAIR*BETRAYAL

Contributed by Brit on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I’m calling
Help, help, can’t anyone help
I am crying out here
But no one can hear my yelp

The pain is taking over
No one cares anymore
Betrayed by my own brother
That stupid whore

Am I doomed to living
In this Hell-on-Earth
Is this pre-decided
Was I destined at birth

I hate my life
I am miserable
Bubba says he’ll always be there
Is he hiding under the table

There is no relief for my pain
The suffering never ends
My mother pulls my hair
And tries to figure out how far back my wrist bends

The pain isn’t physical though
It is locked deep inside me
I can’t let it out
I forbid anyone to see

What is the point
No one would care
No one would notice
That the difference was there

I must leave
Get away like the breeze
To get away
I would swim seven seas

But where would I go
The person I trusted
My very loved brother
He let the bond go rusted

So where do I turn next
I don’t know either
I need space
I need a breather

There aren’t any choices
Death is my only escape
Sleep is my only option




Copyright © Brit ... [ 2003-04-12 11:05:00]
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Re: DESPAIR*BETRAYAL (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:10:03 PM AEST
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i like it, it's something i can relate to


Re: DESPAIR*BETRAYAL (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncooked on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 10:28:38 PM AEST
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Its like a mirror. Your poem is something for everyone to curl up in. Does it help you vent? Sleep is so soothing.




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