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Array ( [sid] => 15821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => SECRETS OF A LONELY WIFE [time] => 2003-04-12 09:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She listens for the sound of the car approaching,
He is late again,working supposedly,
He slips quitely into the room in bare feet,
She hears him but pretends to be asleep.

Together they have been for a long time,
She has known for years another was on his mind,
Broken heart and spirit she guards real well,
This part of her life is a living hell.

Depression is her past time,bitterness her life,
Why does he do this to her she has been a good wife,
Should she confront him with all she knows,
But all of their marriage he has had control.

Gone are the children with lives of their own,
For some reason she needs him rather than be alone,
Prehaps one day it will come to an end,
Will it be to late for her to begin and again.

Depression is depressed anger,
That will finally take you down,
After years of humilation,
Anger stays around.

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SECRETS OF A LONELY WIFE

Contributed by annie on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

She listens for the sound of the car approaching,
He is late again,working supposedly,
He slips quitely into the room in bare feet,
She hears him but pretends to be asleep.

Together they have been for a long time,
She has known for years another was on his mind,
Broken heart and spirit she guards real well,
This part of her life is a living hell.

Depression is her past time,bitterness her life,
Why does he do this to her she has been a good wife,
Should she confront him with all she knows,
But all of their marriage he has had control.

Gone are the children with lives of their own,
For some reason she needs him rather than be alone,
Prehaps one day it will come to an end,
Will it be to late for her to begin and again.

Depression is depressed anger,
That will finally take you down,
After years of humilation,
Anger stays around.

Copyright © annie ... [ 2003-04-12 09:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SECRETS OF A LONELY WIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:15:11 PM AEST
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I like it! it makes me think of my parents...

Re: SECRETS OF A LONELY WIFE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 12:02:04 AM AEST
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AHHHHHH!!!!!! You all make the same stupid mistakes.

First of all DON'T MAKE IT RHYME!!!! I mean fricken hell.

Secondly, the object of peotry is not to tell us. It is to make us think, to make us consider the human experience and the trials and hardships involved therein. Don't tell us what's happeining, show us. Use your words and images to paint a picture for us to look at and understand. Poetry is not a ten second tv spot. You put thought into writing it, make us put thought into understanding it.

Re: SECRETS OF A LONELY WIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Annie on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 09:03:11 PM AEST
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Hello to you ...Guest...Thanks for your comment on my poem...Buttttttt you write your way and I will write my way...OK??? If you are only a guest and know so much about poetry why aren't you a member??? And who are all of us??? that make such drastic mistakes...Pray tell, are you the only perfect one in the world....Shame on you for not using your name...Thanks for reading it anyway.. I will keep in mind your advice and hope you got my message loud and clear..Annie

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