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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nothing More
[time] => 2010-03-16 11:33:20
[hometext] => My first poem ever. Criticism is welcomed.
[bodytext] => Sitting there, silently Observing the world, quietly Everyone's chatting, blissfully unaware- Someone's looking, constantly aware. Do you ever look around? Or are you really just so blind? 'Cause while I notice Everything, including you- I cannot decipher the mystery That is you. The day goes by, you remain Same as before; Time – the precious domain, You ignore it, you do. It has no effect on you- You laugh, you laugh, Never feeling blue, Oh, that is so good for you. And so the time has passed, Certain things have happened not- We must part – no way around it, no plot. Sitting there, silently Observing the world, quietly, A world without you. A bird once leaves it's nest, Never to come back. That's what happened on that sunny spring. When you went off like a King, And me, watching your departing back, Dreaming when will you come back, Realizing something terrifying, Yet so painfully mundane. Bitter smile spreads across my face, The same that I used on you, my dear, When you looked at me, in the past, And told me, this friendship – it won't last. Standing there, with a mask that is my life, Saying, 'Good luck.' And nothing more. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 134 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Devia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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