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[title] => SUN
[time] => 2010-03-16 00:26:42
[hometext] => Thanks for Commenting my Creations
[bodytext] => When the sun climbed down the stairs and walked away I watched it go and waited for another day Bidding it farewell brought a tear to my eyes Not looking back it disappeared in the skies Hoping it would return forever to me Wanted to crush it in my arms not letting it free So when one fine day it came across the sky I called it up aloud and held my arms high Slowly it came and rested on my chest I whispered in its ears that it should never leave the nest It struggled a lot but my arms didn’t budge I told it to stay and not walk the trudge But soon its breath began to fall Not realizing it I still stood tall It whimpered and struggled till its heart gave away And I waited with it until the sky turned grey After a while when I dislodged the embrace Empty were its eyes, blank was its face I sat down there and thought in dismay I should have let it climb down and walk away harsh, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. As of this submission, you have 8 poems posted and only 1 interactive comment. if you wish to continue posting your work, at the very least, bring your comment to poem ratio to 1:1. Thank you. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 75 [informant] => harsh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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