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Pulling me in two.
Yearning for sound,
I scream!
My voice sends shockwaves,
And ripples of noise through the air----
Yet, all remains mute.
Despite my tantrum,
The world continues to march on
Ignoring my existence.
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Poem of My Life

Contributed by JakerBaker88 on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 10:28:11 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Silence overwhelms me,
Pulling me in two.
Yearning for sound,
I scream!
My voice sends shockwaves,
And ripples of noise through the air----
Yet, all remains mute.
Despite my tantrum,
The world continues to march on
Ignoring my existence.

Copyright © JakerBaker88 ... [ 2010-03-15 10:28:11]
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Re: Poem of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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Sounding off for help yet ears are deaf or pretend to be making you feel even more lonely when that didn't seem possible. I like this write as I can relate at times. Well written.

take care
duff

Re: Poem of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 02:31:41 PM AEST
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Really well executed......
This reminds me of a recurring dream I used to have. I would be looking at my
life being played out in front of me, but I was stuck behind a thick glass window
just banging and banging at the glass trying to be noticed by someone - anyone. It can make you very angry.
A powerful and passionate piece x
Star x x x

Re: Poem of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 04:28:27 PM AEST
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Isn't it so ironic how a person can feel so alone in a world full of people. Good one.

Re: Poem of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Inchiostro on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 10:09:22 PM AEST
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Don't feel that way!

Everything you do changes the world around you.

Re: Poem of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 01:45:55 AM AEST
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Very strong poem capturing the anguish of not being heard and feeling dispensible and insignificant, well written

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