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LONELY POET
Contributed by
annie
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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THE WORDS ARE SO BEAUTIFUL THAT YOU WRITE,
THEY TELL SAD STORIES MOST ALL DARK AS NIGHT
HAPPINESS SEEMS TO DRIFT JUST OUT OF YOUR REACH,
IF YOU WILL LISTEN I SHALL TRY TO TEACH,
NO LIFE IS PERFECT FOR ANYONE ON THIS EARTH,
IT IS WHAT WE MAKE OF IT EVEN THOUGH WE HURT
DOWN DEEP INSIDE OUR FEELING WE TRY TO HIDE,
PRETENDING WE ARE HAPPY JUST TO SAVE OUR PRIDE
AND IF WE COULD SIT TOGETHER FOR A SHORT WHILE
TRUSTING EACH OTHER MIGHT BRING A SMILE
YOU, GREAT POET, COULD TEACH ME ABOUT POEMS,
TELL ME TRUTHFULLY WHAT CAUSES YOU TO MOURN.
FRIENDS WE BECAME ALMOST OVER NIGHT,
CLOSELY I WILL LISTEN OF YOUR SAD FIGHT
TRYING TO SAVE YOUR SANITY WITHIN THE WORDS YOU PEN
OUR STORIES ARE SO SIMILAR FOR I ALSO HAVE BEEN
DOWN SO LOW WHERE NOT A PERSON WOULD LISTEN,
WAKING IN THE MORNINGS AS A TEAR DROP GLISTEN
THESE SIMPLE SMALL WORDS TO YOU I SHALL SEND,
JUST LETTING YOU KNOW I AM YOUR FRIEND
MY SHOULDERS ARE STRONG AS YOU MAY CAN TELL,
BUT THAT IS NOT WHERE YOUR POETIC WORDS FELL,
TO MY HEART THEY WENT STRAIGHT AS AN ARROW,
DEAR FRIEND, I AM HERE FOR YOU, TODAY AND TOMORROW.
2002
Annie
Copyright ©
annie
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2003-04-12 05:05:00]
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:37:10 AM AEST
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| Annie, this is so beautifully touching, a great work of art, thanks for sharing this, and welcome to our site, gave you a five star , Val |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Dot on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:03:33 AM AEST
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| Annie, this is just beautiful. You have a great talent to express your inner thoughts. A lovely tribute to your dear friend. Hugs, Dot |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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| Annie.....this is so beautiful. I will cherish it and your friendship forever!! Thank you my dear sweet friend, Larry |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Annie on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:43:50 PM AEST
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| Dear Val.....Thank you so much for the great comments and for the rating.. Makes me feel wonderful..Just wish I had more time on the computer, but my Mom is very ill and it takes a lot of time with her..Thanks again...Annie |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Annie on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:46:52 PM AEST
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| Hello Dot.....Thans for the good review you left on Lonely Poet...It makes all of us strive to be better when we get good comments...Thanks again.... Annie |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Annie on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:50:43 PM AEST
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| YOu sly man you....Thank you for the comments...Thank you for all that you do for me..it keeps me going and writing..I thought for a short time my writing was gone.. but maybe not all of it...love ya, Annie |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:05:12 PM AEST
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Annie, this is so beautiful...your friend is so very lucky to have you.. Great write....
Jenni |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:09:12 PM AEST
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oh Annie this is an elegant poem and a heartfelt tributeto your friend!!
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Re: LONELY POET
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by Opium on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:36:42 AM AEST
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| An excellent piece Annie, and this friend of yours tought many of us true poetry from the great poems he wrote. |
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Re: LONELY POET
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:07:18 AM AEST
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| A wonderful poem for your friend ... I know he will cherish it ... Jan |
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