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Vicious Circle
Contributed by
silent-cry
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's a vicious circle we're running in
And it's burning edges scar our skin
Leaving a deep mark, symbol of our pain
A reminder of this circle we try to escape again and again
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silent-cry
... [
2003-04-12 02:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Vicious Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:21:11 AM AEST (User
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It is an unpleasant reality.. can not escape it is the fate that draws the circle. well written.venkat |
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Re: Vicious Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:57:58 PM AEST (User
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wow, this is a short but powerfully true poem.
feel free to pm me if u ever feel like it.
afraid of fear (charlotte)
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Re: Vicious Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chenobi on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST (User
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How well written in such a restrictive piece of text. When I first read it, I immediately thought of the drag of life. The routine of every day life. It might have not been your concept. Anyway, I enjoyed it. Good expression of emotions. Keep on writing.
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Re: Vicious Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-Cry on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:44:25 PM AEST (User
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it was about life indeed thank u for ur comment:D |
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