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End of the World
Contributed by
boricuacd
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm awaken by the rumbling.
Jumping to my feet I look around.
I can't believe it! The earth is crumbling.
I try my best to settle down.
It's no use I'm gonna die,
no ones around to hold me.
I'm still sleepy, What's the time?
The quake starts to throw me.
Waking up, I start to frown,
There's no one here to stop it.
Hold on! I look down.
Huh! I left my beeper in my pocket.
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Re: End of the World
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:56:45 PM AEST
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funny.i don't really get it,but there's something good about it.
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Re: End of the World
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by exiled on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:52:28 AM AEST
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I dont know if you have a hidden point here or not. But, if I had wrote this my point would have been me waking up was the end of the world to me and my death for another day. Just something to ponder. I really like.
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Re: End of the World
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 06:44:15 PM AEST
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this is a good poem i liked it! keep writing
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