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Array ( [sid] => 158010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love Gone Forever [time] => 2010-03-10 00:53:43 [hometext] => this is my first poem i wrote.I dont know whether its nice or not..But i like it very much because it depicts my life [bodytext] => I was searching for a girl,
To live happily in this world;
After a long time i finally found one,
By a chance i proposed her and;
She said NO,
But why i dont know;
I thought that i was her best friend,
She cheated me which is the latest trend;
Girls use many tricks now a days,
To cheat boys in many ways;
My friends tease when ever they see her,
I cant do anything eventhough i will be there;
I chatted with her the whole night,
Which made me to think that i might;
Again love her in the future,
But now i am a guy who is mature;
Again love is not going to come in my life,
Although it would have been nice if she has been my wife;
In my life love is not going to come again,
Bcoz last time it came,it caused me a lot af pain;
Its been since a long time that i have seen her ,
Still but in my heart she will be there forever;

At the night she came in a white dress,
And at my grave she said YES....................... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Makari [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 46 [ratings] => 12 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Love Gone Forever

Contributed by Makari on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 12:53:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I was searching for a girl,
To live happily in this world;
After a long time i finally found one,
By a chance i proposed her and;
She said NO,
But why i dont know;
I thought that i was her best friend,
She cheated me which is the latest trend;
Girls use many tricks now a days,
To cheat boys in many ways;
My friends tease when ever they see her,
I cant do anything eventhough i will be there;
I chatted with her the whole night,
Which made me to think that i might;
Again love her in the future,
But now i am a guy who is mature;
Again love is not going to come in my life,
Although it would have been nice if she has been my wife;
In my life love is not going to come again,
Bcoz last time it came,it caused me a lot af pain;
Its been since a long time that i have seen her ,
Still but in my heart she will be there forever;

At the night she came in a white dress,
And at my grave she said YES.......................

Copyright © Makari ... [ 2010-03-10 00:53:43]
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Re: My Love Gone Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 01:34:27 AM AEST
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A touching first poem on a first love not meant to be,

Michelle

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