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Array ( [sid] => 158006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Love [time] => 2010-03-09 20:27:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Mind full of words, pencil full of lead
Yet the paper remains empty
I haven't written in nearly 9 months
What has changed in me that I no longer express myself?
I feel like I’ve turned my shoulder on my first love
My love that’s been there for me thru the bad and the good
The love that got me thru my 1st heartbreak
The love that got me thru my teenage years
But how do I thank thee?
I put my love in a drawer, closed and unaltered
So many nights I heard the cry of my love
So many nights I pushed the sounds away
I immersed myself in my new love, my mistress…music
But the more and more I saw my mistress,
The more I missed my real love.
My mistress beckoned for me to leave her
And go back to my maiden love
So here I am,
My heart and my hand haven’t moved this fast in awhile
It feels real good to be back
I missed you first love
I hope you accept my apology and take me back
I’ll never leave you again…I promise [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 21 [informant] => scottpaul85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

First Love

Contributed by scottpaul85 on Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 08:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Mind full of words, pencil full of lead
Yet the paper remains empty
I haven't written in nearly 9 months
What has changed in me that I no longer express myself?
I feel like I’ve turned my shoulder on my first love
My love that’s been there for me thru the bad and the good
The love that got me thru my 1st heartbreak
The love that got me thru my teenage years
But how do I thank thee?
I put my love in a drawer, closed and unaltered
So many nights I heard the cry of my love
So many nights I pushed the sounds away
I immersed myself in my new love, my mistress…music
But the more and more I saw my mistress,
The more I missed my real love.
My mistress beckoned for me to leave her
And go back to my maiden love
So here I am,
My heart and my hand haven’t moved this fast in awhile
It feels real good to be back
I missed you first love
I hope you accept my apology and take me back
I’ll never leave you again…I promise

Copyright Â© scottpaul85 ... [ 2010-03-09 20:27:30]
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Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 11:04:09 PM AEST
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When its your life blood its so bemusing when it won't flow I had that for years, and now wonder how I managed to breathe without it, lovely poem about expressing your love of writing..... so here I am.....well written

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lewis1030 on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 04:55:37 AM AEST
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this was a very expressive poem. I could feel what from your words what you were to convey about your writing.

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