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Array ( [sid] => 157956 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Reprisal [time] => 2010-03-07 19:18:04 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after i got dumped by a girl that i really loved. Its hard to describe what its about like this if you have questions just ask me. also this is the first time its ever been broken into lines so forgive me if the flow is off. [bodytext] =>

I am trapped in my own hell
Somewhere along the way the fun died and the nightmare began
Now the circle is complete and I am what I made
So I dance
spinning and spinning through this endless forever
my music is the sad song of sorrow and my step is the same
Though I see the faces I can not reach them
they sweep past much too fast.
I hold tight to what’s left
for it is my crutch
my cane
and without it I would surly fall [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Inchiostro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Reprisal

Contributed by Inchiostro on Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 07:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am trapped in my own hell
Somewhere along the way the fun died and the nightmare began
Now the circle is complete and I am what I made
So I dance
spinning and spinning through this endless forever
my music is the sad song of sorrow and my step is the same
Though I see the faces I can not reach them
they sweep past much too fast.
I hold tight to what’s left
for it is my crutch
my cane
and without it I would surly fall

Copyright Â© Inchiostro ... [ 2010-03-07 19:18:04]
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Re: The Reprisal (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 11:00:30 PM AEST
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This is a great write straight from the heart......expressing the turmoil of heartbreak in the spinning and confusion and the desperation of having something to hold on to......my music is the sad song of sorrow.....your poetic truthful expression of your heart creates beauty on the page

Re: The Reprisal (User Rating: 1 )
by Inchiostro on Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your compliment.

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