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you are the moon's last breath before the dawn.

i gleam beneath your light;

it is cold and fragrant with
solitude's weeping, and

i am comforted by your loneliness,
the emptiness you
thrive in,

the pale tears you gift me -

tremulous,
i drink from your phantom sadness
and forget

that my beauty is not fatal,
that i am flawful and endlessly human.

i lunge into your darkness,
smiling blindly as you enfold me,

and i become you.

bathed in your sighs,
the bones of your
infinite suffering,

i am pure within your lifeless skin.

tenderly,

i stitch your darkness to mine.

silently,

we become forever.

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de lune.

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 4th March 2010 @ 01:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you are the moon's last breath before the dawn.

i gleam beneath your light;

it is cold and fragrant with
solitude's weeping, and

i am comforted by your loneliness,
the emptiness you
thrive in,

the pale tears you gift me -

tremulous,
i drink from your phantom sadness
and forget

that my beauty is not fatal,
that i am flawful and endlessly human.

i lunge into your darkness,
smiling blindly as you enfold me,

and i become you.

bathed in your sighs,
the bones of your
infinite suffering,

i am pure within your lifeless skin.

tenderly,

i stitch your darkness to mine.

silently,

we become forever.

Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2010-03-04 13:07:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: de lune. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2010 @ 01:05:00 AM AEST
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This made me think a lot of dysfunctional relationships and how they/we nurture each other's depression. There is a melancholy; there is a beauty it. Humans we are; humans we will be. ~S = genius

Sorry if I am wrong in my interpretation but regardless, associative thoughts have their way with me sometimes.

Re: de lune. (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Friday, 5th March 2010 @ 10:46:20 AM AEST
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Hi,

Another gem from the pen!

Your choice of words and structure roll off the
tongue like softly spoken whisperings.

Great write!

Tommy

Re: de lune. (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 01:49:11 PM AEST
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Lovely! And with this line "tenderly,

i stitch your darkness to mine.

silently,

we become forever"

I feel the stiches pull and time stand still...:)

ming

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