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A stranger in the night
Contributed by
Destiny
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A stranger came knocking on my door,
what an odd time of night for a visitor I thought to myself
as I aproached the door a dark shadow come over me
if I opened the door it'd seal my fate
fate of death and pain
who could this odd stranger be?
Now pounding on my door.
A voice comes in my mind
a voice that's not my own
it says the stanger is therapy for my broken soul
but inside I know
This stangers come to take me away
to a land of darkness
pain raining down in sheets of rain
Inside my soul trembles but my fear won't show
I appraoch the door giving up my safety.
I look out the window and see only black
the blackness of this monsters heart
I open the door and get swept away in the shadows
but my skins glowing, translucent.
showing me I'm a beacon of light.
The shadow tries to enter me
then the sun comes up
Copyright ©
Destiny
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2003-04-11 20:45:00]
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Re: A stranger in the night
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST
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Wow!! Intense dream. Great write. Do you have these dreams often???
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Re: A stranger in the night
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by Destiny on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 07:54:32 PM AEST
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| most of my dreams are sort of premonitions, for example one night I had a dream that I was at my uncles funeral and the next morning I found out that he'd died of a heart attack in the night. I try to translate my dreams into what they may meen but this one didn't seem to make much sense to me so I wrote it as a poem that morning because the words came to me before I woke up. Sort of odd I admit but it's part of who I am. |
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Re: A stranger in the night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 04:13:13 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really surreal and really good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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