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Array ( [sid] => 15784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lonely Coast [time] => 2003-04-11 20:05:00 [hometext] => Well, this poem is about a place of refuge that I dream of. [bodytext] => Wonders always happen,
In this place of haven,
It is a mystery,
That takes eternity,
Just to get an answer.

The newest brand of balm,
Its days are mostly calm,
Where darkness says goodbye,
To make broken hearts fly,
As high as an eagle.

Concrete forest always,
Give emptiness of days,
Tearing the ground apart,
Ev'ry beat of the heart,
Until hopelessness dawns.

But not so for this place,
Besiege souls with its grace,
With its arms wide open,
Curing all souls' poison,
Till radiance is ahead.

Like a river of peace,
Its flow will never cease,
Like a gift from above,
Something many will love,
If it is a fire.

This is a lonely coast,
A place unknown by most,
Concrete forest; distant,
Making this place silent,
Yet feel not an island.

Its intentions; revealed,
As lonely hearts are healed,
As hopelessness go part,
To give a brand new start,
The answer for prayers.

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Lonely Coast

Contributed by ronald on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Wonders always happen,
In this place of haven,
It is a mystery,
That takes eternity,
Just to get an answer.

The newest brand of balm,
Its days are mostly calm,
Where darkness says goodbye,
To make broken hearts fly,
As high as an eagle.

Concrete forest always,
Give emptiness of days,
Tearing the ground apart,
Ev'ry beat of the heart,
Until hopelessness dawns.

But not so for this place,
Besiege souls with its grace,
With its arms wide open,
Curing all souls' poison,
Till radiance is ahead.

Like a river of peace,
Its flow will never cease,
Like a gift from above,
Something many will love,
If it is a fire.

This is a lonely coast,
A place unknown by most,
Concrete forest; distant,
Making this place silent,
Yet feel not an island.

Its intentions; revealed,
As lonely hearts are healed,
As hopelessness go part,
To give a brand new start,
The answer for prayers.

Copyright © ronald ... [ 2003-04-11 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lonely Coast (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:03:25 AM AEST
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simply beautiful
michelle

Re: Lonely Coast (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:54:47 PM AEST
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i love this, i want to go there too:)

Re: Lonely Coast (User Rating: 1 )
by vydana on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:36:18 PM AEST
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Of your poems I've read so far, this would be my favorite :)

Re: Lonely Coast (User Rating: 1 )
by Qohinoor on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:25:46 AM AEST
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Yeah, good poem.
You can see its writeup in the Special Poetry Section of the Forums.

Re: Lonely Coast (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 11:17:51 PM AEST
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Ronald, this is a beautiful poem. It certainly evokes a peaceful and calm feeling. It totally deserves to be in the Special Poems Section. Great job. Look forward to reading more of your work. :)

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