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Array ( [sid] => 157771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love of man (first poem) [time] => 2010-02-26 10:03:29 [hometext] => Greetings, my name is Mafezoli and this is the first poem I have ever written.. Your comments and feedback are necessary and I ask you to give your humblest opinion, thanks. [bodytext] => Transcendant in it's perplexity,
Yet truer than Newton's law
Causes faith to prevail on faith and doubt's see-saw
Absent in the hateful
Devoid in our war-ridden world
Most commonly confused for lechery among God's little girls

Oh doubtful ones, who see it all a contradiction
Don't forget what is inside of you,
That which is truer than all convictions

Though this is man's truth,
And to mankind I will continue to plead
We may be doomed to a loveless earth till life begins to cease


If only all humans had the modesty of a bee,
We could enjoy this world and harness our potential in peace and harmony...

But even so! The planets will align, and the Universe may soon crease!
Our mark in time will be nothing but a blemish of God's work, a short and strange absurdity!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 124 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Mafezoli [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Love of man (first poem)

Contributed by Mafezoli on Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 10:03:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Transcendant in it's perplexity,
Yet truer than Newton's law
Causes faith to prevail on faith and doubt's see-saw
Absent in the hateful
Devoid in our war-ridden world
Most commonly confused for lechery among God's little girls

Oh doubtful ones, who see it all a contradiction
Don't forget what is inside of you,
That which is truer than all convictions

Though this is man's truth,
And to mankind I will continue to plead
We may be doomed to a loveless earth till life begins to cease


If only all humans had the modesty of a bee,
We could enjoy this world and harness our potential in peace and harmony...

But even so! The planets will align, and the Universe may soon crease!
Our mark in time will be nothing but a blemish of God's work, a short and strange absurdity!





Copyright © Mafezoli ... [ 2010-02-26 10:03:29]
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Re: Love of man (first poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by Mafezoli on Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 11:00:21 PM AEST
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16 reads no comments comeon post feedback..


Re: Love of man (first poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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First hello, welcome.

I really did enjoy this write,very thought
provoking, and i think very well written

Take care
Fuzzy


Re: Love of man (first poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:40:56 AM AEST
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Your insight is prolific
nothing but truth in your words
this passage is essential to those in denial
it's a universal effort,but one by one
we must seek all things pure
we must find peace within
before we can begin to heal
humbling, I enjoyed your first poem very much


-D.Truth




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