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Array ( [sid] => 157764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Setting you free [time] => 2010-02-26 00:35:31 [hometext] => As they say, set the bird free, if it comes back to you, its your else it never was .. [bodytext] =>
For all the things I miss tonight, peace is what I can’t find,
Can you give it back to me, pleads my queasy mind…

I don’t blame you, for I don’t want reasons to fight,
And I know you’d justify, that even today you are right.

If you had emotions may be you’d understand,
Love isn’t an equation, for numbers don’t comprehend.

There is nothing left for me to say as logic isn’t your game,
You may go and chase that green paper, the way to your fame..!

Money aint everything, I got to say and I never wanted you to go away,
Now I aint stopping you, as I’m setting you free and my wishes with you will always stay..!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Anu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Setting you free

Contributed by Anu on Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 12:35:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

For all the things I miss tonight, peace is what I can’t find,
Can you give it back to me, pleads my queasy mind…

I don’t blame you, for I don’t want reasons to fight,
And I know you’d justify, that even today you are right.

If you had emotions may be you’d understand,
Love isn’t an equation, for numbers don’t comprehend.

There is nothing left for me to say as logic isn’t your game,
You may go and chase that green paper, the way to your fame..!

Money aint everything, I got to say and I never wanted you to go away,
Now I aint stopping you, as I’m setting you free and my wishes with you will always stay..!

Copyright Â© Anu ... [ 2010-02-26 00:35:31]
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Re: Setting you free (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 10:07:04 AM AEST
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Interesting.

I noticed you often paused in the middle of a line. You may want to consider a different pattern of organization by breaking your lines in the middle. For example:

I don't blame you.
I don't want reasons to fight.

It might make the poem more readable. Again, just a suggestion. It's just fine the way it is. It can, and often is a good idea to not break your lines in they way I suggested.

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